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What I say
I can say
to different people
at different times
and though what I say
is the same
the results
change!
What I say
I can say
in different ways
and though what I say
is the same
the results
change!
What I say
I can say
without saying
anything
and though what I say
is the same
the results
change!
What I say
isn’t always
what I can say
isn’t always
what I must say
isn’t always
what i really said
so I’ve stopped wondering
why
the results
change!
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Change!
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14 comments
Maverick says:
Mar 5, 2011
The results probably depend on the people you speak to. Interesting take . My first visit here, it seems there is lot to hang around.All the best.
Neha says:
Mar 6, 2011
You say or dont say anything.. it feels..
The Fool says:
Mar 6, 2011
Interesting poem. Food for thought.
Someone is Special says:
Mar 6, 2011
What I say
I can say,
Wonderful post? Loved it.. Smiles, mine is what most people feel in their heart but no one acts to achieve it, Change
Someone is Special
Muddassir Shah says:
Mar 6, 2011
Agree with Neha,
you say or you dont but you get to feel.
Good luck with the contest. Hope you enjoy reading my entry
Apoorv Prasad says:
Mar 6, 2011
good one….. you should win….
perola says:
Mar 6, 2011
Simple and nice!!! hope you win… my contribution..hope it helps.
keep writing….
aashish sood says:
Mar 7, 2011
I particularly liked the last para… and a very different take on the topic and an even different'er' way of poem… liked it…
i wrote a short poem myself for this… do go through!
Amity says:
Mar 7, 2011
And it is quite a puzzle that what you say isn't really what you said which the end have changed!
Worth thinking about though! A very interesting take on the prompt! Thanks for your comments on my take too!
All the best!
drpratibha says:
Mar 7, 2011
We say same things to different people but they perceive it differently…liked your take on the CHANGE. Good! keep it up!!
anupamavohra says:
Mar 7, 2011
because only change is constant in life
Amropali says:
Mar 7, 2011
Absolutely loved it.
Although I don't think I can survive without words, the futility of it all and the gap between the said and the perceived bothers me increasingly with each passing day.
aativas says:
Mar 10, 2011
Change is not logical!
Anuradha says:
Mar 10, 2011
More than saying, perception matters…
Nice take on the topic 🙂