“Revenge of a food blogger” My entry for the get published contest
by Arvind Passey on Jan 23, 2013 • 11:06 PM 18 CommentsThe idea
Love, they say, is an emotional high that doesn’t care much about logic. We are all capable of this form of love that has all the DNA of innocuous abstractness floating in it… and yet it is love alone that makes the human mind read between the lines, link up all the logical bits scattered around, and then take cold and calculated steps to either dive into the pool of absolute submission or shrewdly place a devastating scintilla that grows into an engulfing conflagration! This story will meander into a mind that has loved and then plotted to kill that love.
Sujata and Gingko are the ones who meet and catch this fever called love… and stumble into moments where they discover all the uplifting thermals that this emotion is capable of. Sujata is a microbiologist who has chosen to be a food blogger and Gingko is a poet who has chosen to be a scientist. His lab in Pusa complex is where he meets Agni, another scientist who actually wanted to paint and read literature. The chemical reactions in the lab result in tell-tale fumes that travel through the dense traffic of Delhi right into the heart of a hotel where Sujata is busy discussing wine and food pairing with Magi Singh, the famous sommelier and writer.
Sujata’s anguish makes Magi tell her of all the arsenic that spurts out when vitamin C gets to play around with shrimps or prawns! This story is about all the emotional debate that goes on in the mind of Sujata when all these potentially explosive elements come together.
What really happens… and how everything happens is what you get to know only when you read the story.
What makes the story ‘real’
Real people, real aspirations, real dialogues, and real facts come together only in real stories… or those that have either happened with almost similar parameters or have the potential to get into real-life characters without causing any alarm to the sanity synapses in a conventional mind.
The entry of another woman in a married couple’s life is real. The dilemmas that enter the subliminal spaces of people involved in such sizzling situations is equally real. The fact that you now want to read the extract and pounce upon some juicy bits of this story is also real!
Extract
Magi seemed to have read her mind well. ‘You’re not thinking about prawns at all right now,’ he said.
‘Prawns?’ she whispered, as if she had heard this word for the first time, and then mechanically she took a sip of the delicious Sauvignon Blanc in her glass and was miraculously brought back into the real world, ‘yes, prawns. I had read somewhere that prawn shells can result in allergic reactions.’
‘Not just allergy. Prawns can poison too,’ said Magi, ‘but first you need to tell me what it is that is bothering you.’
This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal and HarperCollins India.
Arvind Passey
23 January 2013
18 comments
KayEm says:
Jan 24, 2013
Arvind, would like to vote but you haven’t posted the link to your idea. If you go to HC-IB and sign in, then go to the “Get Published” page, you’ll see the link there.
Arvind Passey says:
Jan 24, 2013
Hi there KayEm… the indi link is http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/567
KayEm says:
Jan 24, 2013
Voted 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jan 27, 2013
Thank you so much, dear friend! 🙂 I hope Yashodhara selects this one for the anthology!
gayatri soni says:
Jan 24, 2013
I really liked your entry,& voted for it. Waiting to get it published & read the whole story- which I’m sure would come out as a beautifully written craft.
All the best! 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jan 27, 2013
Thank you Gayatri… even I am quite hopeful!
Ankita Singhal says:
Jan 25, 2013
All the best….
Your Idea has loads of potential…. 🙂
Best
Ankita
Arvind Passey says:
Jan 27, 2013
Your word fill me with a lot of confidence, Ankita. Thank you for your wishes. 🙂
Kriti says:
Feb 5, 2013
You got my vote : )
Arvind Passey says:
Feb 5, 2013
Thanks a lot Kriti… every vote helps! 🙂
Ritesh Agarwal says:
Feb 16, 2013
This is my first visit to your blog. Your post is really exciting…..the way you presented it got me thinking….And I may need a dictionary to check out some of your words. *respect*
Arvind Passey says:
Feb 16, 2013
Hope to see you come again, Ritesh. Wishing you all the best for your journey into the world of story writing.
Prerna Sinha says:
Feb 19, 2013
Real story ,scientific background and lingo.Nice ,please do use slightly simple explainations…for people like us ;0)!
Best of luck!
Arvind Passey says:
Feb 21, 2013
Thank you for the feedback, Prerna… will keep that in mind.
chaitanya says:
Mar 27, 2013
Wow, how did I miss this? This popped up when I was submitting my short story, and I’m totally intrigued by the idea and love the playful way you’ve put it across.
I can’t wait to read your story!
Arvind Passey says:
Apr 1, 2013
Well, I do hope the story has come with the right twists and the right plot… yes, eager to read what others have written. But I think we can do that only once the final results are declared.
Swati says:
Mar 31, 2013
Sir, it sounds amazing! I hope yours gets selected in the final 50 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Apr 1, 2013
I do hope that as well… but I’m just learning to write stories… thanks for your encouraging words.