Travel is always fun!
Just pack your bags and leave your home
Why sit at home when you can roam?
See all new ways, walk on new ways
Say ‘aye’, say ‘yes’, and shun all nays
To far off places is all fun
In snow, in rain, and even sun!
What matters is that you must go
And then, I know, you won’t feel low!
Arvind Passey
01 June 2012
18 comments
Harsha says:
Jun 1, 2012
Hehhe 🙂 You gave enough reasons to pack our bags, sir! That was a cheery poem 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 1, 2012
Good to know that you liked the poem, Harsha. The poem is a syllabic one with eight syllables in each line.
somyaa says:
Jun 1, 2012
its sweet 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 1, 2012
Thank you, Somyaa… 🙂
Amit Agarwal says:
Jun 1, 2012
…sweet and meaningful limerick, Arvind:)
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 1, 2012
Amit, a limerick follows the aabba rhyming pattern… but thank you anyway for liking the poem. 🙂
neha says:
Jun 2, 2012
awesome 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 3, 2012
The response to a poem always surprises me… we have so few poets in India, so few publications, so few poetry buyers… and yet, we do respond well on the net.
Thanks for liking the poem, Neha.
Anki S says:
Jun 2, 2012
That’s such a sweet poem 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 3, 2012
Truth is that I had written these lines for some online contest… and then liked them enough to publish them here as my poem. 🙂
Leo says:
Jun 2, 2012
Traveling does seem to lighten the mood 😉 Fun rhyme!
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 3, 2012
Fun rhyme, yes. Was it fun to write? Yes. And equally important is the fact that I love reading the responses of my friends too… now, that’s real fun!!
Akshay Kumar G says:
Jun 3, 2012
Traveling is fun. Nice rhymes Sir. 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 3, 2012
Thanks a lot, Akshay… just a few words of appreciation do go a long way in encouraging a poet! 🙂
alka narula says:
Jun 3, 2012
haha nyc one 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 3, 2012
Always feels nice to get a comment from another blogger who you like and admire! Thanks a lot.
Manuj says:
Jun 4, 2012
🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 5, 2012
Well, I presume you like the poem… thanks a lot, Manuj! 🙂