On the beach I need to go
And walk around in the sun
In the evening I must glow
And, as ever, be the one
Who wins and not the one who won
So, do not give me spots, dear sun!
See who dangles on my arms
See who kisses all my words
See who follows all my charms
Hear him promise me all worlds!
It’s me, it’s me, it’s me the one
Don’t spoil it all for me, dear sun!
My words, my fears, and my rant
Gave some fearful psycho spots
Until my man said: ‘You can’t
Any more have fears of spots!’
He seemed to me the magic one
Who’ll just make me love you, dear sun!
His magic potion is now mine
I can go out and still will shine
The nights are great and days are fine
His magic potion is now mine!
I have no fear of being the one
Who’ll burn and darken in the sun!
Now on the beach I love to go
And love to walk all day in sun
Every evening I know I glow
Glances tell me that I have won!
I’ve won as friend the one called sun
No fears, no spots…love you, dear sun!
Note from the poet: I wonder if I must give the woman in the poem a name. Truth is that it is a poem that is reflective of all women… but if I were to choose a name, it would be Kyra for now.
Well, it was fun writing this poem for the Lakmè Diva Blogger Contest on indiblogger.
Arvind Passey
28 May 2012
20 comments
sunita says:
May 29, 2012
A woman’s best friend???
Nice rhyme and lyrics!
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
Well, a woman’s best friend is obviously the one who identifies her fears and helps her climb out of them. What he does is important… and not who he is. 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
…and thanks for liking this poem, Sunita! The poet in me loves it!! 🙂
Confused Soul says:
May 29, 2012
Wow.This is lovely 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
Great… and thanks. Hope you aren’t ‘confused’ when you praise this poem? (I know you’re serious, of course.)
Panchali says:
May 29, 2012
spotless…impeccable!
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
Hmmm… I’m still a bit unhappy with the way the syllables are missing the beat that the poem wants to follow… though I must thank you for liking the poem. I’m sure it is far from being ‘impeccable’! 🙂
Alka Jain says:
May 29, 2012
lovely poem 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
Thanks a lot, Alka… I do appreciate your encouragements on my FB page as well. 🙂
Satish Mutatkar says:
May 29, 2012
Very nice:)
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
Thanks for liking the poem… I wish my poetry happens more often.
sibichen says:
May 29, 2012
Well written Passey!
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
Well, we just try to write… it is the reader who decides if what has been written is worth an applause or not. 🙂
Corinne Rodrigues says:
May 29, 2012
This brought a smile for sure, Arvind. Good luck with the contest!
Arvind Passey says:
May 29, 2012
A smile… ah! then the primary goal of the poem is achieved! The secondary objective, of course, is to emerge as a winner…. and I thank you for your wishes, Corinne. 🙂
Raghav Kumar says:
May 30, 2012
nice one uncle
Arvind Passey says:
May 30, 2012
Nice to know that you too read my blog posts… hope to see you here (I mean this website) more often.
Antarik says:
Jun 1, 2012
Nice one Mr Passey 🙂
Arvind Passey says:
Jun 1, 2012
Thanks a lot, Antarik… 🙂
Seema says:
Jun 4, 2012
Wow…lovely poem Arvind ji…all the best 🙂